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The Story (Chapters 5+)
Topic Started: Jan 27 2016, 06:50 PM (346 Views)
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Continuation of my previous story. See here: http://pandoragaming.co.uk/topic/10400575/1/#new for chapters 0-4 :)

5. Confessions


6. Family History
Edited by jammydodger, Feb 6 2016, 07:42 PM.
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Wow, beautiful story, Jammy! :D

Really liked the ending of this one, great stuff!! ^_^

It's good to have a second thread, and I'll be looking forward to the next parts! : )
Edited by Master Snowy, Jan 29 2016, 10:03 AM.
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Chapter 5 is complete, with a slight change to the name of the chapter.
I hope you enjoy :)
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Wow!! Beautiful chapter, Jammy!!

It keeps getting better and better! ^_^

Thanks a lot for the share man,it was a great read...

Sorry, I had to reply late though. I had some guests over and now they're gone :)
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Thank you Snowy it means al lot! :D
First Paragraph of Chapter 6 :D
Edited by jammydodger, Feb 3 2016, 07:05 PM.
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Amazing! And like I've said before, you could make a good novel out of this story one day, Jammy! : ) Honestly...

On another note, I'm slow at understanding things. So, I still didn't get the 'evil pieces' part. Are these pieces living human beings or so? :) I don't know...

But, if I give this para a second read tomorrow, I might understand better! : ) So, no worries there...
Edited by Master Snowy, Feb 3 2016, 08:05 PM.
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No its probably my fault Snowy, I probably didn't explain them well. Basically they are a set of 15 chess pieces given to top-class Devils to increase their ranks by reincarnating other beings into Devils.
I'll go back over it soon and maybe change it slightly :)
New paragraph up, and the MC finds out some shocking news :D
Edited by jammydodger, Feb 6 2016, 07:43 PM.
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I remember you had revealed this earlier too somewhere in a very slight manner.

And so, great chapter yet again, Jammy! :D

I can't wait to read the next part... So, please do keep going. : 0
Edited by Master Snowy, Feb 7 2016, 01:23 PM.
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